writing contest :D

Subject: writing contest :D Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:32 pm

helloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo everybody

hope you are all feeling great.

this topic is a contest for writing
i will see your topics and decide which one is the best.
of course you all will work hard yes? Cool

here is the topic of today Very Happy

write about your best friend cheers

Subject: Re: writing contest :D Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:43 pm

come on you all start writing Cool

Posts : 11 Join date : 2010-01-31

I write the topic of the writing

My best friend is mohammed. He is in grade 6.I went with him to the fun fair ,and we rode together the roller coaster and we were very happy.After that we went to the restaurant to had lunch.Then we returned back home and played chess,hide and seek.It was a funny day because I love him sooooooooooooo much. .

omar mosaad
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Subject: Re: writing contest :D Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:55 pm

That is an excelent topic omar cheers

just a small comment : to have lunch not to had because after to the verb is in its normal shape

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MY BEST FRIEND
MY BEST FRIEND'S NAME IS YASSMIN. writing contest :D Icon_flower

THE FIRST TIME I MET HER AT THE SCHOOL. writing contest :D Icon_study

SHE IS THE BEST FRIEND BECAUSE IN THE BREAK SHE COMES FOR ME AND PLAY WITH ME writing contest :D Icon_bounce

. IN THE LINE WHEN I AM STANDING IN THE BACK writing contest :D Icon_cry

SHE COMES AND TELLS ME COME INFRONT OF ME AND NO BODY MAKE THIS .
I LOVE HER VERY VERY MUCH . writing contest :D Herz

HER NAME IS LIKE MY MOTHER'S NAME AND HER FATHER'S NAME IS LIKE MY FATHER'S NAME . writing contest :D Icon_biggrin

SHE IS THE BEST ONE COME AND PLAY WITH ME . writing contest :D Icon_razz

I WISH WHEN I GROW AND SHE GROWS WE MEET EACH OTHER AND STILL LOVE EACH OTHER. writing contest :D Herz

YASSMIN IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL GIRL .
I LOVE HER AND SHE LOVES ME .

JUJU writing contest :D Lol

Subject: Re: writing contest :D Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:49 am

woooooooooow that an amazing topic really juju
cheers

I wish you will be friends forever flower

really loving our friends is the most beautiful thing in life Smile

just a little comment : nobody does this -not nobody make this ( the sentence of the line)

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It is wonderfull jojo
you are an excellent girl

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Where is Menh Atef???? Question

Posts : 70 Join date : 2010-02-05

My best friend is merna muhamad . I love it very much
beacuse when me go to the break . I see it come with me
my grandpa his name muhamad merna his is muhamad.
First, day we go with us to the zoo. me and merna see lion.
and monkey and elephant. next, day my birth day in
25-11-2009 I called it in the tele phone and she come to play
with me and give me a gift and eat with me the cake and drink juice . when I want helping I called it to help me. Like a Star @ heaven

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who is bluesky

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Subject: Re: writing contest :D Wed Feb 10, 2010 7:43 pm

menna the topic is very good cheers

thanks dear

I will tell you my comments:

I love it very much it must be I LOVE HER VERY MUCH

when me go to the break WHEN I GO TO THE BREAK

First, day we go with us to the zoo
first day we went to the zoo together

I called it in the tele phone
i caled her on the telephone

when I want helping I called it to help me.
when i need her i call her to help me

other tips

these tips are not for menna only all grade two must read it

the past of come is came
eat : ate
give : gave
drink : drank

another small thing in English we dont say and and and
we say fro example
I went to the part, ate the cake , gave my friend the gift, and drank juice

this means and is said only one time in the sentence

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