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PostSubject: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeThu Feb 04, 2010 3:20 am

hi my dear students
i just want you to send me the writing topics you wrote which were home work
i want to check it for you to tell you what are your mistakes mainly because you mustnt memorize things only you must create new things.
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 06, 2010 10:21 pm

where are the topics my dear students? confused confused cat alien
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 07, 2010 4:17 am

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

YOU KNOW WHO AM I

THIS IS THE HOME WORK OF THE WRITING


IN THE SUMMER WE GO TO THE CINEMA AND WE WATCH A MOVIE CALLED

TAIMOOR W SHAFEEA
. IT WAS EXITING MOVIE . AND AFTER THE MOVIE

WE WAS HUNGRY . AFTER THAT WE EAT ICE CREAM . AFTER THAT WE WENT

TO THE RESTORANT . AT THE END I WENT TO THE HOME AND I

WRITE IN THE DIARY WHAT I MAKE IN THE CINEMA.


JUJU
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 07, 2010 6:23 am

wooooooooooooooooooooooow that's great jojo ( and yes i know who you are Cool )

actually i have just a few comments about the spelling of some words and some things about the tenses(the verbs)

about the verbs : they must be in the past (don't worry we will take this lesson soon insha Allah Wink Wink Wink )

as for the spelling


exciting not exiting
restaurant and not restorant



thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks alot for this story honey


cheers cheers cheers cheers cheers cheers cheers
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PostSubject: english   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 07, 2010 10:31 pm

Iam mena atef Iwill answer the H.w
yestarday I go to whis my Family to the park Isee a small butterfly it alawys fly and Isee abig dog it alawys run
fast after I finsh Igo to the park I go to my home and Iread a book. cheers cheers cheers cheers afro afro flower flower
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PostSubject: english   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 1:31 am

Iam mena atef iwill write 26
yesterday I go to alexsandria and I play in the sea
In the winter I play in the rain . In the fall Isee cheers the leaves cheers In the spiring I WAS HAPPY cheers Beause in the cheers spiring Isee my bird cheers born a small baby .
I go with my family to the garden I play food ball.
I go to the cinema with my family Isee film ahmed halmy
When Isee my tree I see hike apple. I love you
when I sleep i see the stars in the sky.
when I EAT THE apple from the tree it have good taste.
I tent with my family in the garden and sleeping bag. I love you
when I GO TO the zoo I see animals. I Live in a country. cheers
I have photos in my home I make it with the camera. when the rain stop Iwas happy beacuse Isee a rainbow I love you Imake a song with my friends . I love you In ramadan Iplay with my lantern. cheers
I love pans egg I love you byyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy








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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 6:10 am

Menna :
story 1
the sequence and order of the story is very good yet there are some mistakes in the spelling and the structure of the sentence(like the verbs) plus it is somehow short

yesterday not yestarday
always not alawys
as for the verbs anything that happened in the past must have the past tense
flower


story 2:cheers: cheers cheers cheers

it is amazing really , long,have more details, you used lots of vocabulary words, and there are really few mistakes it is really an excellent story


thanks alot honey keep the great work
love you I love you
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 4:39 pm

good morning
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 4:40 pm

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii miss maram I to tell you a thing what
the meng of past tenses lol!
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 4:43 pm

noor.bmw wrote:
good morning
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey nobody her
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 5:03 pm

@ Menna : the past tense tells about the things that happened in the past
like yesterday or last week
for example when i say

Sam goes to school every day. ----------------this is present

Sam went to the park yesterday ------------------this sentence is in the past tense


till now you did not take this tense but you will take it very soon in shaa Allah


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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 5:03 pm

how r u noor.bmw?
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PostSubject: english   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 5:20 pm

miss maram you write a rong word it is you write wek like this week affraid
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 5:29 pm

ok
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PostSubject: english   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 5:51 pm

I can't make page 27 only confused confused confused
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 6:24 pm

you want to make it only now?
ok
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 6:34 pm

menna i made a new topic about writing please see it
thanks honey
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PostSubject: noor ayman   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 6:48 pm

good afternoon
i donot know the write answer in q no 8 in page 9
thanks
Razz Razz Question
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 7:01 pm

No they are not nice. Because they are dangerous and they can kill people.
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 7:03 pm

open this link noor part 2 revision
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 7:09 pm

thank u very much
farao farao cheers
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 7:26 pm

you are welcome Smile
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PostSubject: Re: YOUR writing topics   YOUR writing topics I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2010 7:28 pm

noor bmw you are noor ayman? Very Happy
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